Making Magical MEMORIES
How do I say in a word how I feel reading your text? ........ Neha mused.
Speechless,
Flattered,
Excited
It took Neha 24 mins between typing the first letter and the next !!
Thank you Adi for sharing your dream with me and making me feel a part of your life. Am sure
someday I will pen down the dream and journey of Adi, the famous guitarist. For now, Let me
complete your poem, she wrote :
“ I should be asking you that, Neha. Whats up and any surprise planned for today ? ” said Mira with a
mysterious smile as she turned her laptop towards Neha.
It was Adi's FB page and a series of people wishing him Happy birthday. Oh Fish ! its Adi's birthday
today. And I had no clue, Neha rushed to pick her mobile to check the response to the last night’s
message.
Adi had replied " you completed the poem beautifully, lovely start to my day. I have an audition today. Seems like a busy day. You take care and have a good day "
Neha sighed, its YOUR birthday, and it better be good. She smiled as she texted “ Do well, would like to see you in the evening at TGIF at about 6 ?
He replied after a while “ Yes “
The entire day without a message from Adi seemed like a zillion years. Neha was anxious to know as to what happened at the audition, yet she curbed her instincts to text him and ask. Didn’t want to bother him as he indicated that he would be busy and waited patiently till it was time to meet him.
Wrapped up the work for the day , asked the boss for a permission for an early out , hopped in to a cab .. On the way Neha hopped to a Cake shop and picked up a Chocolate Truffle and a candle . Her eyes spotted a red guitar shaped key chain and instinctively picked it up for Adi. Reached TGIF, place seemed crowded , managed to bag a cosy corner anyways noise levels didn’t matter ! Neha waited for him -butterflies in stomach, nervous of her clothes, not sure what would be an appropriate greeting Handshake, Hug, Wave or what?
After a good 30 mins of wait , saw Adi arrive . The brilliant smile of his was missing as he sat beside her with a soulful look in his eyes .Neha was trying to figure out what must have happened at the audition . Time stood still for a while
Adi said “ I did not get selected , need to play better . This would have been a big break and I could have been a part of the prestigious band “ as he explained the concert audition and how he got eliminated after reaching the Top 5 . His ambition, dedication came out in every word and gesture of his. “ NCPA auditorium, roaring crowd, center stage and spotlight on me and the music from my guitar … that would be my dream performance “ he concluded with a gleam in his eyes.
Neha could read the dejection on his face, as she said “ Amen to that. Yes, you will play better. There is always a next time, next audition “ as she set the tone of transparency and belonging. She opened the pastry box and lit the small candle and looked at to him and said “ Surprise !!!Happy Birthday “ and smiled.
Amazed at the moment, Adi’s eyes fixed closely on Neha - She looked beautiful, black tee she wore made her look even more alluring. Her smiling face made him forget his sulk as he leaned towards her and gave her a hug . A perfect moment , even though it was impromptu !
Adi was in heaven in her affectionate care and friendship as he blew the candle and they scooped the
cake “ Never enjoyed a cake so much anywhere ! thank you, Neha ! That is one of the most memorable birthdays of my life” Yes, the magical smile was back , noticed Neha
Dinner at the hotel & thru the conversations they learnt so much about each other as they shared their plan for the future. They realized it was late and as if on a cue Adi said that is ok, let me drop and see you off.
As they parted for the day, Adi teasingly asked her “ Where’s my birthday gift ?
“Gift , hmmm… here is something for you as she gave him the guitar key chain “ .
As he held it , he said “ Key to my dreams - “ Its beautiful, just as you are my poetess … And let me tell you that u write damn well. I don't know if I will be famous enough for u to write about me, but am quite sure that the world is gonna get a fabulous writer "
Yes today was a day of Professional Lows but it was also a day of Personal Highs !
Life is made of moments and beautiful moments make memories.
At times it seems so surreal that care and affection can convert your most depressing sulks to charming smiles.
As she watched him ride off , her cell beeped … message from Mira . “ Congratulations Babe, your project trip to USA is finally on, you have been nominated to handle the offshore project there”
Neha stared at the message …Oh the US project for which I have been looking forward to, and when its finally happening why ain't me happy !!
The US Project or Adi’s dream ….. Neha’s dilemma !!!
Speechless,
Flattered,
Excited
It took Neha 24 mins between typing the first letter and the next !!
Thank you Adi for sharing your dream with me and making me feel a part of your life. Am sure
someday I will pen down the dream and journey of Adi, the famous guitarist. For now, Let me
complete your poem, she wrote :
Tears in her lovely eyes yet the lips had a beautiful smile …
There are some moments in life which words cant define !!
U are the reason for my Smile, cutting thru the far away miles ….
Loved the fire & passion in you, my heart says it wants to see you shine !!
Sent it, and saw that it wasn’t delivered. Probably he must have waited for a reply and slept off !
Next morning, Neha woke up to an exciting face of Mira exploding to break some news.
Hey whats up Mira ? asked Neha
“ I should be asking you that, Neha. Whats up and any surprise planned for today ? ” said Mira with a
mysterious smile as she turned her laptop towards Neha.
It was Adi's FB page and a series of people wishing him Happy birthday. Oh Fish ! its Adi's birthday
today. And I had no clue, Neha rushed to pick her mobile to check the response to the last night’s
message.
Adi had replied " you completed the poem beautifully, lovely start to my day. I have an audition today. Seems like a busy day. You take care and have a good day "
Neha sighed, its YOUR birthday, and it better be good. She smiled as she texted “ Do well, would like to see you in the evening at TGIF at about 6 ?
He replied after a while “ Yes “
The entire day without a message from Adi seemed like a zillion years. Neha was anxious to know as to what happened at the audition, yet she curbed her instincts to text him and ask. Didn’t want to bother him as he indicated that he would be busy and waited patiently till it was time to meet him.
Wrapped up the work for the day , asked the boss for a permission for an early out , hopped in to a cab .. On the way Neha hopped to a Cake shop and picked up a Chocolate Truffle and a candle . Her eyes spotted a red guitar shaped key chain and instinctively picked it up for Adi. Reached TGIF, place seemed crowded , managed to bag a cosy corner anyways noise levels didn’t matter ! Neha waited for him -butterflies in stomach, nervous of her clothes, not sure what would be an appropriate greeting Handshake, Hug, Wave or what?
After a good 30 mins of wait , saw Adi arrive . The brilliant smile of his was missing as he sat beside her with a soulful look in his eyes .Neha was trying to figure out what must have happened at the audition . Time stood still for a while
Adi said “ I did not get selected , need to play better . This would have been a big break and I could have been a part of the prestigious band “ as he explained the concert audition and how he got eliminated after reaching the Top 5 . His ambition, dedication came out in every word and gesture of his. “ NCPA auditorium, roaring crowd, center stage and spotlight on me and the music from my guitar … that would be my dream performance “ he concluded with a gleam in his eyes.
Neha could read the dejection on his face, as she said “ Amen to that. Yes, you will play better. There is always a next time, next audition “ as she set the tone of transparency and belonging. She opened the pastry box and lit the small candle and looked at to him and said “ Surprise !!!Happy Birthday “ and smiled.
Amazed at the moment, Adi’s eyes fixed closely on Neha - She looked beautiful, black tee she wore made her look even more alluring. Her smiling face made him forget his sulk as he leaned towards her and gave her a hug . A perfect moment , even though it was impromptu !
Adi was in heaven in her affectionate care and friendship as he blew the candle and they scooped the
cake “ Never enjoyed a cake so much anywhere ! thank you, Neha ! That is one of the most memorable birthdays of my life” Yes, the magical smile was back , noticed Neha
Dinner at the hotel & thru the conversations they learnt so much about each other as they shared their plan for the future. They realized it was late and as if on a cue Adi said that is ok, let me drop and see you off.
As they parted for the day, Adi teasingly asked her “ Where’s my birthday gift ?
“Gift , hmmm… here is something for you as she gave him the guitar key chain “ .
As he held it , he said “ Key to my dreams - “ Its beautiful, just as you are my poetess … And let me tell you that u write damn well. I don't know if I will be famous enough for u to write about me, but am quite sure that the world is gonna get a fabulous writer "
Yes today was a day of Professional Lows but it was also a day of Personal Highs !
Life is made of moments and beautiful moments make memories.
At times it seems so surreal that care and affection can convert your most depressing sulks to charming smiles.
As she watched him ride off , her cell beeped … message from Mira . “ Congratulations Babe, your project trip to USA is finally on, you have been nominated to handle the offshore project there”
Neha stared at the message …Oh the US project for which I have been looking forward to, and when its finally happening why ain't me happy !!
The US Project or Adi’s dream ….. Neha’s dilemma !!!
A new turn to the story.. :)
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DeleteOh now there is a twist
ReplyDeleteOops the twist....can't wait for the next part...and the poem..wow..
ReplyDeleteDon't know about Neha but world is surely gonna get a fabulous writer in form of you.. :)
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Yeah.. The story has beautifully swiveled around all the emotions,excitement to meet,birthday celebration,rejected in audition,with a twisted plot of getting nominated for onsite project.....in short today's page had very good content :)
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DeleteOhh here is the twist of life.....this part give us very prompt and clear messages.....enjoy yoir life dont wait for tomarrow......very Nice Awating for next part.....keep it up dude
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DeleteSuperb , awaiting for next part ....
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DeletePerception of a keychain to be the key to the dreams.. nice..waitibg for nect one..
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DeletePerception of a keychain to be the key to the dreams.. nice..waitibg for nect one..
ReplyDeleteThanks You khushboo for reading the blog and yes really happy that you could spot the key nuances in the blog
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ReplyDeleteGreat work Girish...,5000 likes is just the begining...keep going...👍🏼
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DeleteMagical Smile and now what next -:) !!!
ReplyDeletelot more dude
DeleteAmazed at the moment, Adi’s eyes fixed closely on Neha - She looked beautiful, black tee she wore made her look even more alluring. Her smiling face made him forget his sulk as he leaned towards her and gave her a hug . A perfect moment , even though it was impromptu !
ReplyDeleteGirish i love u for this ...��
Yes Life is made of moments and beautiful moments make memories.
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DeleteNice twist..waiting for the next part!
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DeleteNice twist..waiting for the next part!
ReplyDeleteAwww such a Wonderful day and well written Giri :) But Twist ... :(
ReplyDeleteGoing to read next part right away... cant wait for it...
Awww such a Wonderful day and well written Giri :) But Twist ... :(
ReplyDeleteGoing to read next part right away... cant wait for it...
thank you dude
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